Monday, 31 March 2014

Evaluation

AS Unit F632 - Foundation Portfolio In Film (Evaluation)
Creative Artefact Evaluation 

My aim for the creative artefact was to produce a short horror film sequence with certain relations to my textual analysis in that it's key focus was the themes explored. The basic premise of the sequence is that of a known killer named Jigsaw begins killing of teenagers and as the body count begins, one girl is targeted upon and we witness her struggle for survival. She manages to escape from the hands of the killer, as the clip is left on a cliff hanger after a dramatic fight scene between the killer and the victim. 

To make the sequence as visibly pleasing as possible, I used a variety of shots in order to make the sequence as interesting and amusing as I could. From previous experience in learning about cinematography and camerawork I put theory work into practise. With practise in taking various shots me and my partner took this practise into the actual filming of our sequence, when operating the video camera to my advantage by examining different ways of conveying meaning through assorted camerawork I was able to take conventional shots such as point of view shots, high/low angle shots and long shots all of which are established in the films of both Stephen Chbosky and Peter Jackson.


In terms of use of key codes and conventions identified in the analysis, through the macro and micro elements, the majority of my shots in the sequence are shot on a tripod and handheld. My partner and me made the conscious decision to film the vast majority on a tripod; the advantage of using a tripod is that it enhanced the framing precision. However the included handheld camerawork increased the realism of the sequence and allowed us to get high angle shots.


Early on in pre production of my short film sequence my partner and me came to the conclusion that we wanted to include a conversation arrangement with an included detached figure – like Susie’s Salmons character in The Lovely Bones (Peter Jackson 2012) end scene. This was a form of a non-diegetic voiceover, as our detached figure was portraying the voice of a serial killer, we used an voice-converter app on my phone to get the desired affect of the tone of the killer so that their natural voice could not be recognised. Many ‘classic teen horror films’ of the 1990’s such as ‘Scream’ (1996) which we based our sequence around, follow a very conventional predictive storyline, in which a group of teenagers are killed off one by one by a mysterious unknown killer. Adding to this in ‘Scream’ initially the pretty girl is killed off instantly, this provided inspiration for our sequence where the girl survives a brief attack/fight scene with the killer.  


For the planning of my short film sequence I started by drawing out a storyboard that allowed me to arrange the microelements; camerawork, editing, Mise en scene and sound.  The advantage of using a storyboard for planning is during shooting on location I was able to keep track of the sequence. Alongside my storyboard sketches I had a shot list that was briefed down just to the number of shots that should be taken throughout the sequence.  Equal with my storyboard next to each sketch of the shot I described the type of shot, what was happening within the shot and a rough description of the sound.

The sequence opens with a long establishing shot of the setting in which the protagonist is introduced to the audience as the camera films her walking down the street towards her house: full of optimism and certainty. We then cut to a medium close up of the same character talking on her phone to the killer. At first she talks with ease as she believes the other caller is her friend, but as she realises this is no joke her facial expressions change to apprehension and fear. I intended for this to show how she feels and build up the anticipation about what is about to happen as she enters the house. We then cut to her inside the house - where the fight scene between her and the unknown killer breaks out. The handheld camera movement in this sequence summarises to the audience the physical struggle between the two characters. In 'The Perks Of Being a Wallflower' Chbosky similarly wants the audience to understand struggle rather than physical he shows mental struggle through the use of the editing technique flash cutting. I decided to follow Chbosky's idea by showing the physical struggle to the audience through hand holding the camera. 


From my point of view, despite various difficulties with organising the shoot, around actors' busy schedules and organising to take out cameras and tripods from college for home shoots, I feel that I was partially successful in achieving my aims. However when it came to editing we found that our storyline had moderately drifted off course from our storyboard due to various variables. Specifically due to problems with finding a male lead and timing we found that we no longer needed a another actor as we could easily just film our main actress and the build up to the fight scene between her and the killer, as this would take us up to the time limit on our short film. Another issue we came across when editing was that due to filming during the night in a few of the shots it was difficult to see the actress, so therefore had to overcome this problem by using editing techniques to brighten the shot and uses faded and dissolves to help the flow of the shots. Overall I feel that the sequence went significantly well, even though we found difficulty in the shooting process and did not get the specific scene we anticipated, however due to these errors I built up my editing skills to make the footage we had into an appropriate film sequence. 





Friday, 28 February 2014

Final Production

After looking back at our first edit we noticed that we has to edit out specific parts of the footage and add various affects to make the sequence look more professional her is the link to our final production;

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vaTI5hiDqTw

Wednesday, 15 January 2014

Feedback Questionnaire

Questionnaire

1. What gender are you?
Male
Female


2. On a scale of 1-5 (1 being very and 5 being very good), how would rate the storyline of the short film?

1 2 3 4 5


3. What do you think worked well in the short film?
Camera angles  Editing Sound     Acting
Other (please state)


4. What do you think should be improved in the short film?
Camera angles  Editing Sound     Acting
Other (please state)


5. Is this short film the type of film that you would watch/be interested in?
Yes No

Why  




Feedback analysis
My film partner and I handed our questionnaire to our film class which consisted of 7 females and 5 males and asked them to complete the above questionnaire on our first edit of our short film. From the results of our questionnaire we found that the majority of our film was scaled at 3 on the second questionnaire which to our surprise was higher than we imagined because it was only our first edit and knew there was certain elements that needed to improved. The results for the 3rd question found a variety of results but mainly found that the camera angles worked well. Similarly there was a variety of answers for the fourth question but also found that acting was a main problem. Finally on the last question we had a balanced amount of answers.

RESULTS;

1. What gender are you?
Male |||||
Female |||||||

2. On a scale of 1-5 (1 being very and 5 being very good), how would rate the storyline of the short film?
1
2
3
4
5

3. What do you think worked well in the film?
Camera angles
Editing
Sound
Acting
Other

4. What do you think should be improved in the film?
Camer angles
Editing
Sound
Acting
Other

5. Is this short film the type of film you would watch/be interested in?
Yes
No


Tuesday, 10 December 2013

First Edit

Progression
After our first film shoot and edit, we have made a few changes to accomodate the development. Firstly we struggled to find a boy to play the role of Jason in our film so had to entertain this problem and change the role slightly to a film named Joe who would have connections to Becky also but rather than her boyfriend Joe would now become her friend. Through filming it took longer than anticipated so had to spilt the filming into two nights, after the first night of filming we came across some difficulties that had to be overcome and re-filmed on the next shoot. As when we was editing we found that we had a problem with the continuity because it did not flow the sequence just went from shot to shot on certain parts so had to redraft what types of shots to use to help it flow more easily. Going back to problems that we faced, another issue was the beginning of the sequence as we decided to use a car we found this difficult so changed it to just walking down the street as the beginning. Aslo for our second edit we need to continue filming and film the changed shots from the first edit, also we need to include a voice over to be added as Jigsaw's voice when on the phone with Becky. 

Here is a clip of our first edit;

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=zjc5Q7ekOaU 



Here is a screen grabs off the changes we have made to the beginning of the script:



After a review with my teacher, we realised that we have to make a few changes, for example to great more tension at the beginning of the sequence and to make the continuity flow better with less jump cuts. 

Thursday, 28 November 2013

Costume List

Costume List

Becky - For Becky her costume will consist of 'normal' everyday clothes that shows that she is just around her house, she will be wearing leggings and a plain t-shirt with no specific logo that could cause offence to anyone. Her hair will be tied back so her facial expressions will be more visible and her make up will be plain and natural. 

Jigsaw - Jigsaw's costume will be dark and discrete heading his face and identity with a mask and the rest of his costume will be all black trousers and top covering most visible skin and a cloak. There will be no need for hair and make up as their face will be covered. 

Jason - Jason's costume will be typically the 'boy next door' with jeans and plain top, also their hair will be styled to see their full face and natural make up will be applied. 


Thursday, 21 November 2013

Shot List

Shot List (in order of sequence)
  1. Long shot (car pulling up to drive) 
  2. Track/Long shot (Becky walking to the front door) 
  3. Zoom (As Becky gets closer to the door) 
  4. Close up (on bag, getting phone out 
  5. Extreme close up (on Becky's face as she is on the phone 
  6. Pan (as she runs inside the house) 
  7. Close up (locking door/looking out the window) 
  8. Mid-shot (fight scene)
  9. High angle (Jigsaw looking down on victim) 
  10. 2 Shot High angle (both fighting on the floor) 
  11. Close up (Becky's face) 
  12. Point of view (Becky looking at Jigsaw during fight) 
  13. Point of view close up (Jigsaw looking at Becky during fight) 
  14. Point of view (Jigsaw) 
  15. High angle (Becky) 
  16. Two shot/mid shot (fight sequence) 
  17. Close up/low angle (Jigsaw)
  18. Shallow depth of field (Knife in focus but not Jigsaw) 
  19. High angle/birds eye view (Knife at Becky's throat) 
  20. Close up/low angle (Jigsaw 
  21. High angle (Jigsaw attempting to stab Becky)
  22. Two shot (Becky kicks Jigsaw) 
  23. Close up (Becky trying to unlock door)
  24. Extreme Close up (key) 
  25. High angle/mid shot (Jigsaw on floor) 
  26. Close up (Becky trying to unlock door) 
  27. Mid shot/ 2 shot (Jigsaw stabbing door) 
  28. Pan (From knife in door to Becky running into the kitchen)  
  29. Track (Jigsaw running after Becky into the kitchen) 
  30. Mid Shot and backward track (Becky running) 
  31. Close up (Becky shutting door) 
  32. Mid shot (Placing chair/table in front of door) 
  33. Close up (Becky's face) 
  34. Upwards tilt (From door handle to Jigsaw's face) 
  35. Track (Becky runs from the door to the phone) 
  36. Close up (Jigsaw's face) 
  37. Shallow depth of field (Becky on phone, Jigsaw unfocused in background)
  38. Close up (On the door, Jigsaw disappears) 
  39. Close up (Becky's face) 
  40. Mid Shot (Kitchen door) 
  41. Close up (Jason's face) 
  42. Shot reverse shot (Between Becky and Jason) 
  43. Pan (Becky running over to Jason) 
  44. Mid shot (Becky hugging Jason) 
  45. Extreme close up (Jason's face) 
  46. Birds eye view (Dropped phone) 
  47. Close up (Becky and Jason hugging) 
  48. Birds eye view (Phone on the floor) 
  49. Close up/Upward tilt (hugging)
  50. Extreme Close up 2 shot (Becky and Jason face to face) 
  51. Over the shoulder (Becky and Jason) 
  52. Backward track (Becky walking away from Jason) 
  53. Close up (Jason's face) 
  54. Pan (Becky runs out the front door) 

Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Risk Assessment

Risk assessment 

Hazard
Persons who may be harmed
Property which may be damaged
Risk controls already in place
Risk Assessment LOW, MODERATE, HIGH, EXTREME
Further action required to control risk ***

Household Objects (lamps, vase, etc) 


The cast and production team. 


The household objects may be broken and the floor may be damaged where the object has fallen. 

The objects will be removed from the location.


Moderate 

Choose a location where there is limited household objects around. 

Knife 


Any one involved in the scene containing the knife. 



The cast can harm themselves if not used appropriately, no household property will be damaged by the knife.  

Use the knife with care when handled and use a blunt knife if possible. 


Extreme 

First aid kit will be on set, just in case of emergency.

Car/Road 


The cast and production team, also any public that is on the road and cars using the road. 



The car itself may be damaged if a collision occurs during filming and the objects in contact in the environment at that time. 

Fully licensed driver will be allocated to drive the car and precautionary procedures will be taken before the car will move such as to check the road is clear at time of filming.   

High 

Do the car scene at a time when there is less traffic around 

Stairs 

The cast and production team, they could trip and fall when on the stairs 



The objects around the stairs may be damaged if they are knocked over if someone falls. 

Use the stairs with care when been used. 

Moderate


Practise the scene on the stairs slowly before filmed.